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वार्ता:कुरुक्षेत्र / प्रथम सर्ग / भाग 2

Kavita Kosh से
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Sorry for writing in english - my hindi editor is not working.

There is something missing in this poem from the original. The third stanza from last is wrong. The second line in that stanza is

Vajr ho kaise sakunga bhog main

I distinctly remember a line that says, Aur isme hai lahu Abhimanyu ka, after which the second line in current content starts. Some two stanzas (I think) are missing

I don't have the book with me to type out the rest of the content. Please someone complete this.

Abhilash.Purohit १३:३७, १७ जुलाई २००८ (UTC)