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"वार्ता:कुरुक्षेत्र / प्रथम सर्ग / भाग 2" के अवतरणों में अंतर
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(New page: Sorry for writing in english - my hindi editor is not working. There is something missing in this poem from the original. I distinctly remember a line that says, '''Aur isme hai lahu Abh...) |
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Sorry for writing in english - my hindi editor is not working. | Sorry for writing in english - my hindi editor is not working. | ||
| − | There is something missing in this poem from the original. | + | There is something missing in this poem from the original. The third stanza from last is wrong. The second line in that stanza is |
| − | '''Aur isme hai lahu Abhimanyu ka''' | + | :'''Vajr ho kaise sakunga bhog main''' |
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| + | I distinctly remember a line that says, '''Aur isme hai lahu Abhimanyu ka''', after which the second line in current content starts. Some two stanzas (I think) are missing | ||
I don't have the book with me to type out the rest of the content. Please someone complete this. | I don't have the book with me to type out the rest of the content. Please someone complete this. | ||
[[सदस्य:Abhilash.Purohit|Abhilash.Purohit]] १३:३७, १७ जुलाई २००८ (UTC) | [[सदस्य:Abhilash.Purohit|Abhilash.Purohit]] १३:३७, १७ जुलाई २००८ (UTC) | ||
19:11, 17 जुलाई 2008 के समय का अवतरण
Sorry for writing in english - my hindi editor is not working.
There is something missing in this poem from the original. The third stanza from last is wrong. The second line in that stanza is
- Vajr ho kaise sakunga bhog main
I distinctly remember a line that says, Aur isme hai lahu Abhimanyu ka, after which the second line in current content starts. Some two stanzas (I think) are missing
I don't have the book with me to type out the rest of the content. Please someone complete this.
Abhilash.Purohit १३:३७, १७ जुलाई २००८ (UTC)
